Writing Argument

We have been focusing around argument writing for the past week and making sure it has Strong adjectives and an emotionally toys with the viewers heart strings. For our topic we did "Should Children be aloud cellphones" We rounded the age to Under 13 and then got started I decided NO children shouldn't be aloud phones while others said yes. Here is my cellphone argument. 

Should Children have Cell Phones?

Do you want your children addicted to a mobile device screen from such a young age, killing their child life and imagination and

only interacting with devices? Well…  I think NO, your child needs the right amount of exercise, a healthy life and to be able to

communicate to others. 

Firstly Exercise, As a kid exercise and playing is a big thing that parents want them to continue through

till secondary school.  BUT… with a device your child will adjust to be all antisocial revolving around

their life and consuming all of their time. Quitting out of school activities and sport, And…  one of the

BIGGEST parent expectations of completing school work well that will be reinstated with social media

and other useless time wasting apps. 

Secondly your child's health, They get less sleep, a negative impact on their mental health

,it also impedes their limit to learn and use their ingenious mind and constructs a behavioural

problem and an addiction towards the phone.The World Health Organisation have shared with us that using

cellphones have increased the number of brain cancer because of electrical impulses from devices.Imagine your child

with Brain cancer a lifetime sickness! 

How would you feel if you were trying to communicate to your child and they are constantly ignoring you and on their device? Well there are other ways to communicate and sometimes the person is right in front of them and they IGNORE them for their device which is utterly DEPRESSING because they will end up with absolutely NO friends . Parents and Family it confines your time together because they are constantly listening to or playing on their phone. Is that something you really want? Because if you don’t stop this then your child will be an adult before you realise and  you will regret the lousy choice you made.  

What do you think? Would you get your kid a phone under the age of 13 because their friends have one or they want it badly. WIthout a Phone you could have a Healthy social child who commits  to sports and other activities. With a phone an Antisocial , Unhealthy and unfit child… Is that what you want!?